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Eric responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 7:56 am →
I am intrigued with the tone of this piece. There seems to be an ominous feel to the action in the poem. I would love to see what you finally end up with (if possible).
On another note: what plugin/program are you using to create the embeded (I think that is the right term) look/window for your piece?
Thanks, by the way, for posting you do. I always enjoy coming by to see the “new news” in the world of poetry.
peter responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 8:30 am →
i like this
Collin Kelley responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 9:53 am →
I like it, too. It does have a bit of suspense that continues to build. Good stuff.
Helen Losse responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 10:51 am →
I like it. too Jilly.
emily responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 2:48 pm →
i like the second stanza best. also, I love “destroy, destroy/ delight.” very nice.
Jilly Dybka responds:
Posted: February 12th, 2008 at 7:39 pm →
Thanks.
I never know where a poem is headed. We’ll see. I’m feeling very ominous these days.
Eric: I used the “pre” html tag, which you can use to enclose already-formatted text. That way you don’t have to manually put in spaces, etc. The way the “pre” tag is styled on this blog is with an inset border with that stripey background. These are the styles for it:
background : #fff url(images/bb_pre.jpg) repeat;
font : 1em ‘courier new’, courier, monospace;
color : #000;
border : 2px inset #9e9e55;
width : 99%;
height : auto;
padding : 4px;
margin : 10px 2px 10px 2px;
max-height : 200px;
overflow : auto;